BYU LinkedIn Disclaimer

I found this on someone's LinkedIn, quietly posted in the description of their BYU education. I think it's a great way to call out BYU's shit. Would you add, remove, or change anything?

'After graduating from Brigham Young University I learned the history of Brigham Young. Young was a racist, misogynistic, authoritarian, who incited violence and murder. I am grateful for the education I received at this institution, however I believe Young's name should be removed. Also, I urge the Board of Trustees to acknowledge, apologise, and make amends for many damaging actions and rhetoric towards the LGBTQIA community and all other communities who have been harmed. Discrimination and fear mongering have no place in an educational institution'